Thursday, December 22, 2011


the last one to fall
remembers all who went
before and waits no more

2 comments:

  1. So, your haiku break the 5-7-5 rule, heh? That's so Brown. I break rules when writing hsinku.

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  2. 17 syllables is the name of the game dave. how we get there, that's another story. as the japanese say "the length of a breath"...

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